Fallen Angel

“A FALLEN ANGEL”

(A Collaborative Writing Activity)

          Angelo, a tall, angelic face with a white clothes is an angel who is in search for his one true love. One day, while he is in the sea, he was shouting as if he is seeking for someone who will fill the sadness and emptiness in his heart.

          “My Creator, where is she?” he shout.

          After several minutes of asking for his true love, a wave came out and an image of a woman destined for him appeared. A voice spoke to him.

          “My son here is someone whom I bring upon you. Love her as you have loved me and take good care of her as you take good care of yourself. Never let tears fall from her eyes because if that happens you will earn the consequence.”

          The lady which appeared before Angelo has a sweet loving face, gentle lips, long silky hair, that made him fell in love with the woman. She called the lady “Samantha.”

          Angelo and Samantha fell in love with each other and made the most of their days with love and romance.

          One day while Angelo is flying, he happen to see a lady which he thought to be Samantha. It’s just that a spell was coming out from the lady that moved Angelo to approach her. When Angelo went near to the lady which he thought to be Samantha, he said;

          “Why are you here?”

          “I’m here searching for you. I want to prove my love to you.” the lady said.

Angelo was shocked of what he heard from the lady. As Angelo was hypnotized by the spell, the lady took advantage by caressing the body of Angelo.

          Angelo and the lady spent the night making love with each other. As Samantha was looking for Angelo, she saw her guy being hugged by Zheena who happened to be her bestfriend. As she saw the two, tears fell down from her eyes. Immediately, on the part on Angelo, the spell was removed. He regained his consciousness. As he was mesmerized and was shocked as he saw Zheena hugging him, he pushed Zheena away and about to follow Samantha who was terribly crying. But Zheena did not let him go away.

          “Please, please. Do not leave me.”

          “You had given me the potion that made me make love to you. You must be punished by our God.”

          Angelo ran away to follow Samantha. As he was flying to follow Samantha, a light appeared before him, he heard a voice saying;

          “You have sinned against her, you have sinned against me.”

          “I’m sorry my God. I’m sorry, please spare me from my sins.”

          “Look for her, and you will find your true essence.”

The voice faded away and Angelo continued his search for Samantha. He was in difficulty in searching for his one true love. While flying, he noticed that the feathers of his wings are slowly falling and he felt weaker and weaker as he flies, until such time that he fell to a street. Angelo is really weak. He couldn’t move his legs, nor his wings. He was very desperate. He was hopeless and blaming himself. While he feels unworthy with all his sins, a hand embraced around his neck and he heard a voice saying;

          “Because of what you did, you will face the consequence. You will be mortal.”

          Suddenly the bell rang. Angelo was awaken and knew that it was only a dream.

          “What a bad dream”, he went back to his working room to continue his angel masterpiece. While he was working and looking on the angels that he made, he realized then that he must change for the better so that someday he will not be a “fallen angel.”

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